Here is prologue and chapter 1 to my novel "In Search of Ingram" i was hoping to get some reviews/remarks on it...

“IN SEARCH OF INGRAM”

PROLOGUE

As Michael Ingram made the turn around the bend he lost control of his black, BMW 650i coupe.
His car skidded off the road and went hood first into a ditch. Before he could gather his thoughts and stop the uncontrollable muscle movement from shock, a masculine silhouette stood outside the driver’s side window.

“What the ----,” Ingram gasped…

1

[Friday, November 11, 2006, 6:55 a.m.] Jonathan Shelton was driving into work when he spotted a black sedan off the side of the road. The lights were still on, illuminating the nearby trees. He pulled over and got out of the car immediately, leaving his blue, Ford Explorer running. Tracking through the light covering of snow, that had fallen overnight, Shelton rushed to the car seeing if anybody needed help.